Feedback from Brief Ideas

I pitched my ideas to four other class mates and this is the feedback which they have given me.  

Brief 1

In general, the group liked the twist to my idea, could do with more, they thought it was planned quite well but they thought I should have a twist with the coma, more of him hearing voices, than reading minds. 

They thought t was a good idea but if not thought through carefully, it could become confusing. 

Brief 2 

When hearing this brief, they said it was planned well, was similar to 'Silent Hill' and is a good idea. They thought it would be good if there was another room that the mother can go into to read about the history, e.g a library. "It will be awesome when a bit more scary". "Could be made more brutal".

Brief 3

With brief 3 they said they liked the monologue idea but some of them thought the homeless idea may not work too well, then again some thought it was a good idea. They thought it was very informative, should work quite well and seems fine how it is, needs a little more but they don't know what. 

Brief 4

For this one they thought it was quite good, would be very graphic but they don't think they should forget their issues, it should be chaotic and should try find a cure for the plague. They also think that people would watch and that it would be quite entertaining.  "Again, more brutal, the better!".